Open the Way

The key. The vessel. The witness

Day two of week three for Bradley Ramsey October horror writing challenge/contest is here and with it, another prompt, another submission, another short horror story. Today’s prompt in question is a psychologically rich one that I hope you will enjoy. And as always please enjoy today’s musical pairing to help you immerse yourself in the writing.

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Open the Way

The faint sound of chirping
sung outside the open window
like a blustery tune.
The sheer white blinds rustled
gently against the touch of the breeze.

Cars honking and children laughing
in the playground below the fifth-floor windowsill—
it was peaceful and quaint.

A dreadfully stark comparison to the interior
of that fifth-floor apartment.

Furniture overturned,
deep gashes and grooves
strewn about the walls and various surfaces,
books torn to shreds,
and paper littering every inch of the floor.

And at its center lay Phineas,
stuck in what appeared to be a catatonic state of sleep,
his jaw agape as semi-translucent saliva
drained from his mouth onto the floor.

A boisterous crow careened past the windowsill,
cawing loudly and triumphantly,

jolting Phineas awake
as he shot upright, gasping for air,
scanning his surroundings in a blistering panic.

“W-what the hell?
W-where am I?”

It took several long
and painful moments—
his heart only seconds away from bursting out of his chest,
like an alien parasite—

before his sanity calmed enough to recognize his surroundings.
The viciously trashed dwelling
was none other than his own apartment.

“Ugh, my head… what the hell happened last night?”
His eyes closed tightly as he rubbed his temples vigorously.

Slowly opening his eyes, his jaw dropped.

“WHAT HAPPENED TO MY APARTMENT??”

Looking at the surrounding chaos that was his home,
desperately searching his mind for memories of the night prior—
but none would come to light.

Moving to all fours as he tried to stand up,
he saw it.
A lump formed in his throat, almost causing him to forget how to swallow,
as he let out a silent internal scream.

His hands—
both of his hands—
from the fingertips
to the base of his palms—

were not just spotted;
they were covered utterly
in a deep crimson liquid.

The stench of a foul, metallic odor
emanating from his hands hit his nostrils
as he realized what it was.

Phineas’s back arched
as the entirety of the contents of his stomach
regurgitated onto the floor in front of him.

His eyes watered
as he fought back the pain of acid from his stomach,
burning his esophagus
as it exited him.

“Dear God…
oh dear God,
w-what happened to me?”

He tried again,
with even more fervor this time,
to recall any semblance of a memory—
of what on earth had happened last night.

But no matter how hard he tried,
nor how deep he dug into his subconscious,
not a single memory or even thought
could be retrieved from the night before.

He shakily stood to his feet,
like a newborn doe taking its first steps,
flipping back over an overturned and shredded couch.

Placing the torn cushions back into their places,
he slumped down heavily into their embrace,
his mind splitting in two from the desperate attempts
of any form of memory recollection.

Wiping his blood-stained hand on his white shirt,
he leaned down to grab the TV remote—
which, surprisingly,
was one of the only two objects
not laid waste to by the cacophony of destruction
encompassing him.

With a gentle flick of a button,
the flat-screen TV whirred to life,
cycling through various channels
as Phineas searched for something—
anything at all.

The channel flipping halted
as he stopped on a local news channel.

“Please be warned—what you are about to see
is far more graphic than anything we have shown you on this station,”
a clearly and visibly distressed anchorwoman spouted out,
reading from the teleprompter in front of her.

Various images flooded the screen,
each more grotesque than the last—
bodies mutilated beyond recognition,
limbs severed,
faces missing,
deep gashes,
and entire ribcages torn from their chests.

The only thing that made them known as human corpses
was their makeup, composition, and form.
The news host kept reading monotonously from the screen
as various images and video feeds scrolled by.

“Police are on the lookout for the perpetrator
of one of the most horrific crimes not only our town,
but our nation, has ever seen.
At least twelve bodies were discovered at roughly five a.m. this morning.”

She paused for a moment,
seemingly trying to catch her breath and steel her resolve.

“What was thought to be the attack of a bear or other large wildlife
has now been determined to be something far more sinister.
This attack and the subsequent wounds inflicted
...
...
have been determined to be caused by human origin.”

Phineas’s eyes widened
as he gazed upon his semi-cleaned,
yet still blood-stained, hands.

“The attack took place over the course
of only a few minutes, according to investigators,
in the back alley of Hillshire Park Apartment Complex.”

His eyes went wide once again—
that apartment complex was none other
than exactly where he lived.

Phineas sat in stunned silence,
the faint hum of the television screen
casting a soft pale glow upon his face.

His mind refused to process
the words he had just heard.

Each breath came shorter,
more ragged than the last,
as though the air itself
had grown thick with guilt and dread.

He turned the volume down slowly,
but even in the absence of sound,
a strange ringing filled his ears.

At first faint,
like the buzz of a dying light bulb,
then clearer,
rhythmic,
almost patterned.

Tap.
Tap-tap.
Pause.
Tap.
Tap-tap.

His gaze drifted toward the far wall,
where the plaster had cracked
in a wide spiderweb of fissures.

Each fissure seemed to pulse faintly,
like veins beneath translucent skin.

Phineas blinked hard,
his temples pounding,
his stomach twisting.

“No… no, that’s not real,”
he muttered hoarsely,
pressing his palms to his face.

But when he looked again,
the cracks were gone,
replaced by the familiar stains of age
and chipped paint.

A cold sweat slid down his neck.

Then—
a sharp caw from outside.
The crow again.

Its black wings cut across the light,
landing on the sill,
head cocked, watching him.

The hum in his ears grew louder.

“Get away…”
Phineas whispered,
voice trembling.

But the crow did not move.
It merely stared,
eyes like two pits of ink,
and when it opened its beak—

the sound that came forth
was not a caw.

It was static.

Low, distorted static—
the same pulsing tone
he had heard behind the television,

the same rhythm
that had echoed in the walls.

Tap.
Tap-tap.
Pause.
Tap.
Tap-tap.

Phineas stumbled backward,
crashing into the overturned chair,
his breath coming in sharp, uneven gasps.

He stared at the crow,
but now there were two.

Then three.

Each perched along the ledge,
their bodies perfectly still,
their black eyes unblinking.

The static filled the room,
pouring from the walls,
from the vents,
from the hollow of his skull.

He clutched his head and screamed,
“Make it stop! For the love of God, make it stop!”

The sound ceased instantly.

The apartment fell silent again,
but the silence was wrong—
heavy,
dense,
alive.

He could feel it pressing against him,
like the air itself had weight.

He glanced at the television—
it was off.

And yet, in the reflection of the dark screen,
he could see movement behind him.

Something vast and slow,
like the shifting of a shadow beneath water.

He turned,
but there was nothing.

Only the deep gouges along the wall,
where the plaster had peeled away.

He stepped closer,
tracing one groove with his fingertip.

The line curved downward,
then intersected with another,
then another—

forming a pattern,
a spiral,
or a symbol.

It pulsed faintly beneath his touch.

The moment his skin met it,
a blinding flash filled his vision—

not of light,
but of memory.

A dim alleyway,
the sound of screaming,
his own hands tearing through flesh,
faces turned upward in terror,
then the sky—

the sky alive,
rippling,
breathing,
its color shifting in impossible hues,
a voice, not heard but felt,
like heat across the mind.

And within that voice, a command:

Open the way.

He gasped aloud,
stumbling backward,
falling to his knees.

“No… no, that can’t be real, that can’t be—”

The crow’s call interrupted him,
but this time, it came from inside.

He looked up.

The window was open,
the blinds swaying softly,
as the first crow stepped through the frame,
landing on the floor before him.

Its feathers shimmered faintly,
as though reflecting something
that was not in the room.

The static returned,
louder now,
vibrating through his bones.

The crow tilted its head
and spoke in a voice
that was his own.

“You remember now.”

Phineas’s breath hitched,
his body trembling uncontrollably.

“What… what are you?”

The creature blinked slowly,
black liquid dripping from its beak,
and when it spoke again,
its voice was layered,
like a chorus of echoes.

“The key.
The vessel.
The witness.”

His heartbeat thundered in his ears
as the walls began to tremble.

The cracks and gouges widened,
revealing something beneath—
not wood, not brick,
but flesh.

The entire apartment quivered,
breathing as though it had lungs.

Phineas staggered to his feet,
the floor slick beneath him
as blood seeped through the boards.

The crow took flight,
circling his head once
before darting toward the far wall.

It struck the plaster—
and vanished through it,
like stone turned to water.

From the other side came a faint, hollow hum,
followed by whispers—

not words, not language,
but understanding,
poured into his mind like molten metal.

He clutched his skull and screamed,
as images burned behind his eyes—

cities inverted upon themselves,
skies folding inward,
oceans suspended in air,
and beneath it all,
a shape that had no form.

A hunger older than thought,
stretching out through time and void.

The apartment lurched violently,
throwing him against the couch.

Through the window,
the city skyline wavered,
buildings bending toward one point in the distance—
a great black circle
slowly unfurling in the sky.

The air outside vibrated,
the same tone that had haunted his mind.

His reflection in the windowpane
stared back at him,
but its mouth was moving,
and his was not.

“Finish what you began,”
it said.

The spiral on the wall glowed,
bleeding light into the room
as the ceiling began to split.

Beyond it,
the night sky pulsed,
like the surface of some vast, unseen ocean.

Phineas took a trembling step forward,
reaching out toward the spiral.

“What do you want from me?”
he whispered.

The voice within the walls replied,
not in sound,
but in meaning—

To come through.

The last thing Phineas saw
was the crow,
perched upon the sill once more,
its eyes reflecting the impossible sky.

And then—
the light consumed everything.

The television clicked on by itself.

A news anchor’s voice filled the empty room:

“Breaking news tonight—
a second series of killings has occurred
within the same Hillshire Park complex.
The suspect remains unidentified,
but witnesses report hearing
a strange humming noise
and seeing what they described as
a black sun forming over the city.”

The screen flickered,
and for a split second,
Phineas’s face appeared on the broadcast—
eyes hollow,
mouth open in silent reverence,
as the darkness behind him moved.

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The Devourer hungers, and I intend to keep feeding him.
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At the end of October, one writer will be crowned the winner, with a story narrated on The Saved as Draft podcast.

Let’s see how far these stories can go.
Keep wandering the maze with me.

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