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Sarah Rusch's avatar

This was siiiick. I'm excited to read more!

Bradley Ramsey's avatar

The convergence of the two worlds in this first chapter is masterfully done. Loved the perspective shifts, and I can already seen how you've become more comfortable in D'veen since your last visit.

FInton's voice and mannerisms for example are spot-on here. The imagery of the shattered moon, and the comments on hubris and the realm's history are all excellent.

It truly feels like these two worlds were destined to meet, regardless of the cost. I look forward to more!

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